00:07:52 Emily Akin: Glad to be here Kristy. 00:12:17 Lee Pollock: Is there bait on the end of that hook? LOL 00:17:03 Cher Stein: These are well known people, what about hooks that got you that were from not so well known people? 00:26:39 Yvonne MacKay: "Could be more entertaining than the title. Makes me hope...." Makes me laugh! 00:33:02 JennDoss: Does addressing the reader in your hook work in fiction? Or is that mainly for non-fiction? 00:33:38 Martha Artyomenko: Oh, I really did not enjoy that book. It could have been like 500 pages shorter. 00:38:40 KCWC Classroom 3: 30 minutes remaining. THIRTY minutes. 00:40:18 Deena Adams: I got a call and missed #11. Can someone share it with me? 00:40:30 Anne Foley Rauth: number 11 is ask questions 00:40:31 Kristy: Ask questions 00:40:43 Deena Adams: Thanks! 00:45:36 Yvonne MacKay: haha re: statistics prof 00:55:52 Yvonne MacKay: I'd be interested to hear more about endorsements, if you have time. 00:57:19 Marlene Houk: Excellent and clear workshop! Should I use any of the same words in all of the hooks if I have a series of nonfiction books? 00:57:53 KCWC Classroom 3: 10 minutes remaining. TEN minutes. 00:58:06 Deena Adams: At a conference when someone asks, “What are your writing?” Or “What’s your story about?” It feels awkward to jump into a one liner hook. Is there a difference in the kind of hook you’d use when you’re letting an agent or editor know what the story is about? 00:58:29 Diana: Thanks for the great list. 01:00:30 Tracy Helixon: Generally, what would be considered an acceptable platform for an emerging writer? Thanks! 01:04:10 Cher Stein: How far ahead to ask for an endorsement? 01:04:45 Jo Massaro: great information 01:06:27 Susan Hayhurst: Enlightening and helpful presentation. Thank you! 01:06:50 Marlene Houk: Thank you Bob! Good perspective about writing a hook for a series! 01:06:57 KCWC Classroom 3: Please finish up and close out. Our time is up. 01:07:37 Stacy Simmons: Thank you, Bob and Kristy, for a very informative presentation. It is appreciated. 01:07:51 JennDoss: Thank you! 01:07:56 JP Robinson: Thank you very much for a great presentation! 01:07:56 Deena Adams: Thank you so much! Great session. 01:07:57 Dayna Ault: Great job! 01:07:58 Tracy Helixon: Thanks so much! 01:07:58 Liz Bradford: Thank you, Bob! 01:08:02 Kelly Goshorn: Excellent class! 01:08:05 Janet Morris Grimes: Terrific! 01:08:06 Sally Jadlow: Thanks, Bob! 01:08:09 Marlene Houk: Thank you Bob! This has been so applicable! 01:08:11 Kimberly Burkhardt: Great class!! 01:08:16 Lauren Harrison: thanks!!!! 01:08:17 Yvonne MacKay: wonderful. Thank you!! 01:08:20 Lee Pollock: Great job, Bob 01:08:29 carolynhall: Thanks for the good info.